Thanks - that's a typically extensive response! I didn''t mean Moyes was looking to have structures run exactly as SAF did (in terms of scouts), more that he would look to oversee everything - acting as de facto DOF as well as Head Coach (if anything, more hands on, given the amount of training ground delegation SAF apparently did in latter stages and the uses he made of Ass. Mans). For someone known for building up databases of available players at Everton, he clearly didn't do a very good job of managing upward in terms of identifying then pushing Woodward for suitable CMs once it became clear Fabregas wasn't available, or long-term Defensive and forward options, so I'm not going to eulogize him, even if he made a point of saying we needed to update.
I think all things you mention can be true/credible, and are indeed plausible (including the negative effect of Mourinho/Ole re. pursuing good targets and in developing the recruitment structure as opposed to largely sidelining it to go to Woodward directly) and we can still acknowledge that structures, even beyond whether there's a DOF or not, play a hugely determining part that at times goes beyond the manager profile. So whilst Klopp might have made good use of an underused or appreciated Liverpool structure, even with money ostensibly available, ours was so under-developed around that time (when Woodward approached him) he might have struggled to transcend it and make top-4 early on, until (if everything you say is true about Murtough's capabilities and the work he's nevertheless been able to do behind the scenes) establishing a working relationship with JM.
Even then, the issues around not completing transfers quickly are largely out of the hands of the manager , once they actually support acquiring a target, which again comes down to this question of responsiveness (to initial requests and then to alterations in deals) from the top of the organization, scaling down to CEO to set day to day agenda and targets as well as implementing reform and then the ability of the negotiator to do their job Again, I don't think we disagree about ownership setting the agenda, (i.e Bloom or Brentford), so I think it's fair to blame the ownership proportionately in this case, based on the stories. I think thats true even if , in some alternative reality, Guardiola took over, and might have, through sheer rep and personality, been able to wrangle them into acting more quickly at certain junctures when players became available, as well as establishing a more suitable player profile . In actuality, of course, I suspect a PG would have resigned fairly quickly, but who knows...maybe, like Klopp, he would have used what was there to its utmost potential in terms of speeding up the reform process alongside Murtough, and eked a league win by year 3, as well as quietly persuading ME to bid for united sooner....